Steamy characters…foggy plot

The book is a first person omniscient read, but bounces often between POVS. It can often be hard to keep up with as the POV changes in the middle of paragraphs. This story is based on a fantasy of star crossed lovers in the mist of dreams. It chase good spice and scenes that are steamy. Yet the plot itself leaves you wanting more. The character development also isn’t as natural as I’d want it. A good read for something easy and for those wanting steamy romance.