The prose is fine but nothing special. The tense and pov get confusing and twisted toward the end. Maybe that's the point but I was so irritated and uninspired with 2 hrs left that I just wanted it over.

The narrator is also slow and  irritating. She's fine for description or the female character's dialog but any time a male character spoke she lowered her voice and slowed down even further.  It sounded stupid and thus made all the characters sound stupid.

Hate. Do not recommend.