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A review by whatsheread
The Bad Ones by Melissa Albert
3.5
THE BAD ONES is Melissa Albert's latest novel. Known for her fantasy worlds, Ms. Albert changes things by setting this story in the un-fantastical Chicago suburbs. She doesn't abandon her roots, however, which means there is more than meets the eye as you progress through the story.
Unfortunately, THE BAD ONES is not up to the same standard as Ms. Albert's previous stories. For one, it suffers from pacing issues. The novel starts WAY too slowly; I couldn't get more than five pages before falling asleep, no matter what time I started reading. And this lasted well into the halfway mark. Once you reach that midway point, the story becomes a race to the end. There are few explanations for the supernatural element, which Ms. Albert introduces towards the last third of the novel. The rush and the last-minute introduction of something that dramatically changes the story make for an unsatisfactory reading experience.
However, I do like how Ms. Albert portrays Nora. She doesn't shy away from showing Nora's inner turmoil. Friendships are tricky, and Nora must maneuver through the emotional aftermath of a long-time friendship that abruptly ends and the guilt that ensues once Becca disappears. We see Nora hesitate to seek potential love while experiencing a loss. Because of this, we know that Nora is more vulnerable and fragile than most teens. It makes her a likable character, even if her relationships are questionable.
The main message of THE BAD ONES is one we've heard before and often. Ultimately, we know that people experience things we cannot know, and we should be mindful before criticizing them. Ms. Albert doesn't just remind us of this fact. She hits us over the head with this idea of secrets that are not just shocking but also life-changing. It not only makes you question what someone might be experiencing, but it changes how you look at other people. Because you never know.
I still love Ms. Albert and her writing even if I wasn't enamored with THE BAD ONES. More than anything else, the pacing is what makes THE BAD ONES such a disappointment. Her characters remain strong and well-developed. The plot is good, albeit it suffers from too much exposition in the first half and not enough in the second. I'm going to chalk this up to a one-off and expect good things from Ms. Albert in the future.
Unfortunately, THE BAD ONES is not up to the same standard as Ms. Albert's previous stories. For one, it suffers from pacing issues. The novel starts WAY too slowly; I couldn't get more than five pages before falling asleep, no matter what time I started reading. And this lasted well into the halfway mark. Once you reach that midway point, the story becomes a race to the end. There are few explanations for the supernatural element, which Ms. Albert introduces towards the last third of the novel. The rush and the last-minute introduction of something that dramatically changes the story make for an unsatisfactory reading experience.
However, I do like how Ms. Albert portrays Nora. She doesn't shy away from showing Nora's inner turmoil. Friendships are tricky, and Nora must maneuver through the emotional aftermath of a long-time friendship that abruptly ends and the guilt that ensues once Becca disappears. We see Nora hesitate to seek potential love while experiencing a loss. Because of this, we know that Nora is more vulnerable and fragile than most teens. It makes her a likable character, even if her relationships are questionable.
The main message of THE BAD ONES is one we've heard before and often. Ultimately, we know that people experience things we cannot know, and we should be mindful before criticizing them. Ms. Albert doesn't just remind us of this fact. She hits us over the head with this idea of secrets that are not just shocking but also life-changing. It not only makes you question what someone might be experiencing, but it changes how you look at other people. Because you never know.
I still love Ms. Albert and her writing even if I wasn't enamored with THE BAD ONES. More than anything else, the pacing is what makes THE BAD ONES such a disappointment. Her characters remain strong and well-developed. The plot is good, albeit it suffers from too much exposition in the first half and not enough in the second. I'm going to chalk this up to a one-off and expect good things from Ms. Albert in the future.