I really enjoy the concept of this world, the magic system, and the intergenerational familial connections. Hell, I even liked the romance f- for the most part. Where I struggled is with the main character and pacing

Rika is dealing with a lot. A literal identity crisis. However, 

I was expecting her to embrace the confidence and self-assuredness of Her Other after the Awakening Ceremony. When that didn't happen I honestly was disappointed. She also just didn't ask enough questions for me. Yes all of this is a lot to take in and the weight of world is being thrusts on her shoulders but a simple "what will happen at my Awakening?" or "how do I claim the gate?' felt critical. 
As far as pacing, it took way took long for her us to find out important information. After the Awakening, when Rainne starts to explain what happened, who the hell decides to go to bed at that moment? Why did it take one million years to learn that Rebati would die when Rika claimed the gate?
Another thing that is definitely a me thing - is the fact that Rika would be thinking about banging Joseph at the worse times. Like sis this is literally life or death. You need to focus instead of asking him if he wants you. 

 

I am still very curious about the other gates and if War is next I definitely want to read it.