I didn't had high hopes but I was still a little disappointed. even if it's a short story at least there should be some development and some angst.

Everything felt too instant and the dialogues were too long and too unbelievable no one talks how they were talking. and the dance was so meh.

but one thing I'll say is the last two chapters were a huge improvement and I did like the ending and itmdid make it all somewhat worth it.

will I read the sequels? yes I will