For me, this book suffered from two issues: the over use of sarcasm/snark and the total over-protectiveness of Jordyn. It was shown over and over how she could more than take care of herself, yet she was practically kept under lock and key. It got annoying after awhile. I also started to wish that she could interact with others and not be so sarcastic. Just be serious for one freakin' minute. If it weren't for those two things, I would have really enjoyed the story.