Too many stories from the point of view of stunted (mostly emotionally, although a few seemed intellectually stunted as well) people. Often, I didn’t even find that they went anywhere.
The writing style was fun for the first 3 sentences, then quickly grated.
Toward the end of the book, a couple stories seemed almost worthwhile, but it wasn’t enough to save the book.
Oh, and Ms. July, there are quotation marks on your keyboard for a reason. Please use them.