I think the omegaverse system was really unique here and I really wish the fated system was expanded because it is so interesting. The story overall wasn't terrible, and I loved that the FMC made the guys work for it. She didn't just forgive them when they reunited. I also wish that we had more attention on the suspense side of things. Since we had a lot of time building it up through her story it just felt like all of the suspense happened at the beginning and then the end of the book and the rest was steam and groveling. I still want to read Bea's books though. Hopefully, get more of the fated system explained.