Pretty good for a debut! I thought the motive behind the killer was very interesting and unique and the killer’s POV actually gave me chills at times.
Angelo’s story was left a bit unfinished for me and I think he really deserved a good ending. The Clara and Valerie beef wasn’t wrapped up well at all imo and I could still think of quite a few questions about that entire situation. I also feel like there were quite a few areas where 100 pages could have been taken out.