This one is difficult to rate. It's certainly very well-written, and the characters are very well developed. It's particularly accomplished when you consider it's a debut. However, I think I'd like it a lot better if it had sequels. It felt like only the first chapter in an epic story (one that I'd love to continue reading) but it seems like she intended it to be stand-alone. Overall, would recommend it, even though it feels incomplete.

Please write a sequel, Temi Oh!