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A review by souplover2001
Just for the Summer by Abby Jimenez

3.0

i throughly enjoyed this and i AM going to read every book in this series LOL it's a 4 in my heart for characters and plot but unfortunately i have too many grievances with the actual diction used and descriptions 😭😭 the most egregious writing examples being
maddy unironically using the word "unalived" and a terrible, terrible passage where emma describes her outfit for the day that feels like it was taken directly from a wattpad novel written by a 13 year that had me SO floored because her outfit was just like. a white tshirt and leggings that very much did NOT need a description of it
. also. idk i think that while the first person pov helped to develop the voices for the main characters, but i feel like it also rly inhibits the descriptive writing :/

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