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A review by breabooks
How does it feel? by Jeneane O'Riley
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
sad
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.0
I’m not saying it’s good, but I enjoyed it for what it was?
Whoever edited this needs a new job- so many errors. The author didn’t do a good job of keeping the two POV’s consistent in the way they spoke. Mendax was all over the place- from formal to casual to formal and not in a way that was indicative of his character’s development.
And that one scene. They barely acknowledged it? What?? And was it consensual? Gag. It feels like it was inserted to appease the booktok peeps.
The ending. It wasn’t believable. The author did not set that up well. At all.
This had the potential to be so so so good but was disappointing. It at least was interesting enough that I need to know what happens next.
Whoever edited this needs a new job- so many errors. The author didn’t do a good job of keeping the two POV’s consistent in the way they spoke. Mendax was all over the place- from formal to casual to formal and not in a way that was indicative of his character’s development.
And that one scene. They barely acknowledged it? What?? And was it consensual? Gag. It feels like it was inserted to appease the booktok peeps.
The ending. It wasn’t believable. The author did not set that up well. At all.
This had the potential to be so so so good but was disappointing. It at least was interesting enough that I need to know what happens next.