Definitely needed a good thorough edit before publishing, tons of grammatical and spelling errors. The writing is really repetitive, “his newfound strength that he had found,” lots of hands clenching and nostrils flaring every 5 seconds, etc, and it just does not flow well at times, missing a few page breaks or something.

I did finish it though and the story itself was okay, just kind of abrupt, I feel like there could have been less scene detail and more storyline detail. We don’t need to know everyone’s facial expressions every time they speak but it would have been nice to be clued in on some of the key world building a little better.

The spicy scenes were just okay and the wording got a little weird most of the time. I about just put the book down for good when there was something about “grabbing her jiggle” or something like that

Overall, would not read again, prob will forget about it and not read any sequels, but I was entertained enough