Ok so, writing has improved since the first one. There is less cringe moments, and overall the actual writing sucks less. There was also some actual semblance of plot with this one that I didn’t get from the first, so that was nice. Lilly’s fashion sense is still atrocious. Also, I hate pregnancy trope so that kinda ruined it a bit. Also the author like doesn’t understand how pregnancy works fully which makes it even worse.