Let's address the Thrush in the room and get this out of the way.

The prose and flow of this is horrible for 3/4 stories.
Which ever one of you authors did the last story, go into dark fantasy you need a career change, man.
That story alone leapt this to 4 stars even though the rest of the stories are lack luster in performance issues.

It enraptured the raw emotion and vibe perfectly. I won't spoil what it's about because it spoils literally the other 3 stories.

Worldbuilding while not creative, was comfy in a way that you knew it wasn't pushing too many boundaries. Does that make sense? No? But cozy fantasy people kinda know what I mean.

Either way, this is a debut and hard to judge too harshly, but I applaud what you two were trying to do. Prose, pacing, and the overall flow needed a massive rehaul. But y'all did something a lot of writers would dream of doing:

Publishing SOMETHING


(Future me, refer to rabbit notebook.)

4/5