Scan barcode
A review by bethbarron
The Butterfly Bruises by Palmer Smith
2.5
I received a copy of this from the author.
The first six sections are comprised of poems while the final section includes several short stories.
I really enjoyed poems referencing literary works we all read in college (looking at you, lit majors/minors) as well as the Carolina odes, and references to climate change. While I felt some of the poems lacked cohesion to the rest of their section, I enjoyed the author's writing.
The short stories could have been standalone, in my opinion. There is some interconnectedness to the rest of the collection, but they really felt like a separate collection entirely.
I noticed some structural and grammatical issues throughout that I hope are adjusted prior to publishing.
Overall, an interesting read!
The first six sections are comprised of poems while the final section includes several short stories.
I really enjoyed poems referencing literary works we all read in college (looking at you, lit majors/minors) as well as the Carolina odes, and references to climate change. While I felt some of the poems lacked cohesion to the rest of their section, I enjoyed the author's writing.
The short stories could have been standalone, in my opinion. There is some interconnectedness to the rest of the collection, but they really felt like a separate collection entirely.
I noticed some structural and grammatical issues throughout that I hope are adjusted prior to publishing.
Overall, an interesting read!