I enjoyed this, but I wish it had been a full length novel where more of the characters and their relationships were fleshed out. I think the same plot just would have benefitted from a longer, more detailed format that allowed more suspense to build up. It felt like things just jumped around so quickly and a lot of the characters felt like they were only there to fill plot holes and lacked substance. It was a good concept just didn't feel right for short story format to me.