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A review by tayloranne
Haunting Adeline by H.D. Carlton
Did not finish book. Stopped at 42%.
So repetitive and boring. The writing wasn't good enough to keep me interested, and there were just some sentences and phrases used that made me cringe so hard I wanted to put the book down (and usually did). I was determined to get to 50% before calling it quits and seeing what the smut was like, but even that was subpar in my opinion. I get better material while scrolling through my tumblr tags.
ALSO the main make character made no sense. How can he be so morally against kidnapoy and sex trafficking but simultaneously stalk this woman and want to hurt her? It would have made more sense for him to have a Christian Grey complex type of thing, like using sex to escape his reality and the trauma he sees and goes through and puts the terrible sex traffickers through.
ALSO the main make character made no sense. How can he be so morally against kidnapoy and sex trafficking but simultaneously stalk this woman and want to hurt her? It would have made more sense for him to have a Christian Grey complex type of thing, like using sex to escape his reality and the trauma he sees and goes through and puts the terrible sex traffickers through.