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Forbidden: Part One by Emilia Emerson

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lokeylez's review against another edition

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i realized that this book has a second part and then also a sequel and although the book is good and i enjoyed reading it, i couldn’t find it in myself to be excited to read all of them. all together it’s about 1,600 pages.

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kae_okie's review against another edition

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For such a long book the story dragged. I’m not sure I can finish this book then go on to read part 2. I found the FMC draining and whiny. I love a good OV story especially when it’s cozy and low angst. I feel like this book had too much crying and self deprecation. I understand that self love is a journey but the way the FMC was depicted in the beginning as head strong and forceful I was expecting someone more confident and self assured. Instead we get someone who cries at the drop of a hat. Every interaction with her alphas start with her crying and them reassuring her that they do care and find her attractive. This book definitely had potential to be great especially with the underlying government/political  issues, I just couldn’t get past the characters to continue reading to learn more. 

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ashatroyal's review against another edition

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challenging dark emotional tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.0

Honestly, the whole pack is insecure in their own way. They each are so aggressive and enraged on the others behalf but so helpless and not forgiving to themselves. “ That way, you three selfish, cheating assholes can go off and have your orgy without me being in the way.” Girl, what?! I was over it after reading that. Like why would he miss being with betas? Josie doesn’t want the men to see her naked but she’s into BDSM? The men can’t say anything to her without her feeling insecure. I just got bored because I kid you not every page is littered with insecurity. I also didn’t like that the author made it seem like their designations were a separate entity from the character. The fmc would refer to her omega instead of just being an omega. Josie was worried about being separated from her pack but prolonged her bonding. Not going to read the next book in the series. 

Did the guys ever do anything? Why would Sam ask to stay at her house instead of his own apartment ? 

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k_dorner's review against another edition

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challenging dark emotional sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.5


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haley_jay's review against another edition

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dark emotional hopeful fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

4.5⭐️
3.5🌶️
3🎧

This book was thrilling. It had me in a chokehold from start to finish. To be fair, you say omegaverse and I come running, and I’m fairly easy to please. But I loved fhe political landscape we for to experience and I’m excited to see where it goes. 

A couple of things. The MFC has a lot of body dysmorphia due to neglect and verbal abuse, and an anxious attachment style ON TOP OF being an omega coming off heat suppressants for the first time. So some readers might see her a being super whiny and needy and annoying because she is constantly seeking reassurance from her alphas even when they’ve made it clear they want no one else. 

Being a plus size woman with an anxious attachment style myself, I felt so seen lol. I am Josie without the whole Designation Center trauma and abusive family bit 😂 so. However I think Ms. Emerson wrote her panic attack scenes so well. I think a lot of people who haven’t experienced this would understand this type of person a lot more after reading these scenes. 

The story did plateau for me right about the 65%-80% mark. There was a lot of character development and definitely some big plot points, but the action was pretty low compared to the beginning other book. However it ramped right back up at the end. And that section of the book was still a delight 🥵 to read. 

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booklov3r__'s review against another edition

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I did in fact not liked this :)

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rhreviewer91's review against another edition

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challenging emotional funny hopeful sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

Years of being abused, neglected, tested on, and having her rights taken away, Josie just wanted to live her life alone away from all Alphas. She'd been taking black market suppressants for as long as she was able to, provided by the one alpha in her life she knew she could trust. Her supply ran out while out in public, however, and everything went wrong. 

Forced into pack interviews, she meets a couple of women against the Omega suppressing government who help give her an option for a pack who isn't terrible and would support her and allow her rights and freedoms. The government doesn't make it easy, though. They don't want Omegas having ANY rights or freedoms, and they're out to be sure Josie doesn't have them. 

The cliffhanger at the end is BRUTAL, but thank goodness the second book is out!

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bschram001's review against another edition

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emotional medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0


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readingwiththeroberts's review against another edition

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emotional funny medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

 This book exceeded my expectations! I was in the mood for a werewolf/omegaverse book and this book delivered. I loved these four together and I thought Josie's men were so sweet and understanding throughout the entire book. Josie has been through so much in her life that even though she is dropped into any woman's dream, she can't really appreciate it. And throughout the book we learn more and more what she went through and that even her men went through some terrible things.

I can see why some people didn't like this book. I feel like you have to be in the mood for this book to really enjoy it. I mean if you read an omegaverse book then there are just certain cheesy things that come with it. One thing that really bothered me was the amount of apologizing for things that wasn't the person's fault and how insecure Josie was throughout the entire book. At some points her insecurity just got to be a little too much for me.

What to expect:
~ Plus size FMC
~ 3 hot cinnamon roll boyfriends
~ Protective alphahole boyfriend
~ British accent
~ A man who reads romance books
~ A man who knits blankets for his girl 

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bookmarkedtbr's review against another edition

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dark emotional slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

Summary
Josie has been through things most people can't even imagine and she's given up hope of being able to find a pack with love. Cam, Ben, and Theo have given up finding an omega for their pack in part due to how horrible omegas are treated by society. When they're paired together by the resistance, they both may have found what they're looking for.

Thoughts
The best omegaverse I've read in a while in terms of overall storytelling. This book was very dark, but there's something about the writing and the characters that kept me hooked. I adored the way the guys always put Josie's feelings ahead of their own and they spent as much time as needed to make her feel secure. The overarching plot about the government and the resistance's fight against it was very detailed and seamlessly integrated. What a crazy cliffhanger though.

FMM, omegaverse, Why Choose?, explicit, plus size heroine, trauma, nesting, knotting, cliffhanger

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