Oh man, this comic is insanely disjointed and confusing. I only read 14 pages and was already lost. It feels like literal pages of the comic are just missing to give context to what's happening (like some panels on the girl being attacked by geese would have been nice?? Show don't tell - you're literally writing in a visual medium. Why are we getting this story after the fact??). Transitional panes between scenes are also your friend. It is honestly unreadable.